Before I start this review, I have to apologize for my horrible English. Second to that, I can't believe this track is rated so 'low'.
The track definitely fits the title and description, great job! May I ask what libraries you use to make your compositions?
As for any critique, perhaps it sounds too muddy at some parts? I've read you use Sonatina Symphonic Orchestra, I know those have quite some reverb, haha. The percussion is well balanced, not overtaking the whole composition, so that's good. Perhaps the piano might be a bit too loud? Although it is a great addition to the whole composition.
As you can see, I totally suck at writing reviews. All I can say is keep up the great work! You got a new fan here!
~Caeruleus Draconem